Tyrant Film: Rough Edit Preliminary Task 1
Feedback: Teacher
- Dramatic sound effect need to be added when jack is up against the wall.
- Transition from heavy to light needs to be smoother. ( transition to don't worry be happy)
- Like sound/ score in the beginning.
- Credits and after effect
- Sound bleeds from jack against the wall to black.
Feedback: classmates - Bad
- Work on transitions between music
- improve transitions
- sounds bleeds
- sound effects need to be improved
- making the film shorter
Feedback: classmates - Good
- sound score
- camera shots
- editing
- good transitions
- the change in tone with the music
- look of the title
- huge improvement from previous work
- start was very effective at creating suspense
- sound at the beginning was good
- camera shots work together
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